I'm in agreement. I actually like the approach but I think some of your instrument choices could have been better. I like the percussion sounds but some of the synths seem really vanilla, especially that lead. Something like this, the sounds need to morph more, otherwise they end up sounding static.
Not a fan of direct sampling the FF8 vocals either, especially when they haven't been processed and manipulated enough. There's a little bit there in the tail end, but most of it still sounds lifted out of the original.
I think with something like this, the sound needs to be bigger. Try playing with some stereo separation to give it some space.
This reminds me a lot of something Mazedude might make, so you're on the right track, but I still think it needs a little push in terms of sound design.
NO, resub