DarkeSword

Except Brittney Spears is a lot hotter than Dave Wise. ... Okay so who's with me on the BritneySpearsRemixProject? BSPROJECT.OCREMIX.ORG

NOTE - Original rejection: http://www.ocremix.org/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=40286

1) Wait until the project is completed before asking. 2) You will not demand anything. 3) You're welcome to submit something, but don't expect it to be a part of the project. I'm looking for exemplary work.

I just want to say hi to all the newbies. HI NEWBIES. Man I'm so bored. postcount++

STFU

Right click save as doesn't work. Make a page on your webspace that links to it.

No. Anyone's allowed to post, so long as they don't whine, bitch, moan, or otherwise complain about the project. Constructive criticism is welcome from ANYONE.

Right right. The list is updated.

KirbyMixer - 22/57 - Water Drop chthonic - 3 - Son of Wind Adhesive_Boy - 41/42 - L'il Traveller Dj_StarChild - 33/34 - Star Herald Rellik - 55/37/22 - Swift Hunter Suzumebachi - 28/29 - Dream Hunter Ellywu2 - 18/19 - Dream Warrior Trenthian - 1/2 - Star General Sir Nuts - 13 - Great Ace DJ Ikronix - 14/15 - Final Star Destiny - 56 - Hero of Lore DarkeSword - undecided/backup mixer analoq - backup mixer Darangen - backup mixer, available for collab There's what we're working with so far; Rellik and KirbyMixer are both incorporating 22 due to a miscommunication on my part; however, Rellik's piece isn't focusing on it, so it's okay. I'd like to avoid any further overlapping though. Trenthian, as you can see, nobody's doing 51, so go ahead and incorporate it if you'd like.

Don't worry about it Rellik. It was my fault. KirbyMixer, remember when I talked to you on AIM the other day? Fountain of Dreams is track 57 on the NSF, so you can work that into your piece. Everyone: if you've got WIPs, post them, because then we can all provide feedback. If everyone can get solid demos by the first deadline, I won't have to cut anyone . Ikronix; the clip sounds fine to me. I'd have to hear more of it in the context of the mix to make a good judgement though. Keep going with it.

Messy string work along with poor mastering brings this mix down. Low end is too high (ha!). Guitar sounds so GM. The arrangement is repetitive. Not much in the way of development other than passing that eighth note continuo line to different intstuments. Needs more work. NO

Way too repetitive and some of that resonance on the pads get a bit too much at times. I really don't think there's enough evolution in this piece to warrant a YES. Perhaps if some of the textures changed to more different sounds I could pass it, but there's just not enough development here. NO

Wow. The pilot samples were cool in the beginning, but then you just kept playing the SAME ONES OVER AND OVER AGAIN. Talk about overkill. As for the mix, its quite simple. Coverage of the melody was very underwhelming. That lead doesn't do anything interesting, ever. It seems like its just going through the motions. There are points where I'm thinking that the lead will switch up into something crazy and fat, but it stays the same boring lead. Unexpressive, unemotive, repetitive, simplistic. Nice texture, but you need a lot more than that to get a YES. NO

Wow so tricky; however, I'm inclined to agree with Prot and Vig here. I get such a major key vibe from this song, and the original is so clearly minor. And even though it's cool to go from minor to major and vice versa, this just comes off so much like an original song inspired by Black Dream than an actual arrangement of the song. The chords seemed to be altered, the melodic lines are changed, its just a different song with a few common threads. What a disappointment; such a nice track. I'm keeping this. NO

Water should drop out after a while and we should start concentrating on the instruments. Reverb is crazy in this song; everything's bleeding together (ohnoes get a bandaid!!~!). Mastering is total poop. Come on man, you're a lot better than this. Oboe/horn thingy is nice, but it bleeds in with everything else. Remaster and resubmit! NO

That last part of your email is bullshit, bro. We can do without that next time, thanks. Here's why you get passed up and other people get posted. You do covers. Like this one. Very nice sound, but weak arrangement. It follows the original very closely in terms of instrumentation and feel, which means you didn't really bring much to the track. Same genre, same instruments, SAME SONG. We're looking for a remix, not an expanded version of the original. NO

Prot: Alex sent you his sheet music? Personally I like the buildup to 2:20; nice stuff there. Piano section sounds a lot like the original; not much changed except it's got less emotion. Seems kind of plunky. I would have enjoyed it more if you went for something fresher. However, the rest of the mix is not bad at all. Nice textures and stuff. I like it! YES

Summed up: pretty much a cover of the oringal, albeit played very nicely. It's just that it's too repetitive; it doesn't do anything that the original doesn't do. Lets get a guitar solo in there man! NO. Work on and resubmit.

Damn this mix gets way to repetitive. I checked my timer and I was like, "Damn this thing has been going for 4:40 already and nothing new happened." Vocals are sloppy and amateurish; there are some intonation issues that make me cringe throughout the mix. Vocal tricks don't work; I can see what you're trying to do, but they don't work. NO

YIKES CLIPPING!!! Lets get this fixed and go for a resubmit, shall we? Look at levels, balance, and general mastering issues. The clipping is annoying, but the arrangement is good. NO (Please Resubmit!)

I believe it stands up as an addition. It's got a nice, groovy, laidback feel. Sounds are very sharp and clean; a trademark of ziwtra's work. I like the arrangement too; progresses nicely with some good variation. Nice. YES

No balance on the sounds! Bass is overbearing, and things blend together way too much. That lead is detuned boredom in audio form. Some nice percussion stuff WAY later down the line, but it starts repeating itself, which kills the charm. The whole thing just has a very amateur sound. The percussion for the most part is the same tinny hat sound cutting through the whole mix. Gets annoying after a while. Pay attention to the balance of your instruements. I don't know what to listen to. NO

Repetitive, boring, and unoriginal. DO SOMETHING with the song. There's hardly anything here of merit that I can't get listening to the original. Relies way too much on source material. NO

Nice concept, nice execution. Nice work. Can't get much higher praise around here than that. YES