OceansAndrew Posted August 25, 2008 Share Posted August 25, 2008 I was thinking of cleaning this up a bit and subbing it. There are a few level issues, and I think the lead guitar tone will be redone, but is there anything else? Thoughts? http://oceansend.com/5502/ocr/rock/OA-Phoenix_Wright-Yeah,_i%27d_tap_that_(Mia_Fey%27s_theme)-RTS.mp3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
F4T4L Posted August 25, 2008 Share Posted August 25, 2008 sounds fine to me, but if you can improve upon it then by all means have it and share. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eino Keskitalo Posted August 26, 2008 Share Posted August 26, 2008 "Very nineties" I just heard from my left as I put this on play. It does remind me of a TV title theme of some sort.. Pretty solid stuff. I don't have many issues. In the very first part, the first 35 seconds, the sine-ish synth lead in the beginning is piercingly loud and competes with the guitar leads. The guitar could be tighter - I don't find fault with the lead tone, it sounds ok in the very next part, and towards the ending the background guitar melody in the same style sounds good as well. It may be that you just need a more inspired take there. I like the arrangement with the dual guitar lead! In the part that begins at 01:02 it feels like nothing takes the foreground. The distorted backing guitar doesn't fit in the song in my opinion, and is not great sounding, quite muffled and quiet. It makes it feel weak, which is not great for a rrrraging annnnggggry disssstorrrted guitarrrr. The chorused clean guitar I like, it could be more prominent. These specifics aside, it's a high-quality track, and a fun listen! Hope these comments were helpful. --Eino Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NautilusEx Posted August 26, 2008 Share Posted August 26, 2008 Yeah, early 90's I'd say. I like it though. The only gripe I have is the title. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dunther Posted August 26, 2008 Share Posted August 26, 2008 I'm not an expert, but please improve this mix, OCR need more PW. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spakku Posted August 27, 2008 Share Posted August 27, 2008 Throughout the vast majority of the franchise, she's dead. I, for one, would not tap that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eino Keskitalo Posted August 27, 2008 Share Posted August 27, 2008 Yeah, the title is definitely ghastly. --Eino Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PianoCat5 Posted August 27, 2008 Share Posted August 27, 2008 I really like this so far! It reminds me of a remix that Tepid worked on of Fisherman's Horizon. Keep working on it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OceansAndrew Posted August 27, 2008 Author Share Posted August 27, 2008 hmm, general song title dislike... How about Yeah, I'd tap that ((if she wasn't dead) Mia's Fey's theme) seems a bit overly complicated... :/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choccy Posted August 28, 2008 Share Posted August 28, 2008 This song is sooooo good, especially the first ~30 seconds, chilled my spine; Mia Fey's song fits amazingly well. And yes, you can rename it to 'I'd tap that (if she wasn't dead)'. Wonder if it fits, though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ramaniscence Posted August 28, 2008 Share Posted August 28, 2008 needs more cumshot Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rozovian Posted August 28, 2008 Share Posted August 28, 2008 No source link, no source comment. Seems to lean to the right a bit. Also, the intro guitar sounds fake, in a bad way. Either synthy or more realistic, but it's in the uncanny valley of guitar sounds, imo. Could be the fret noise that's giving it that effect. Arrangement is pretty, tho the main melody gets a bit tiresome. I like the bass writing, but those semi-note steps are good... in moderation. I'm not bothered by the backing guitar, it's quiet enough to pass unnoticed during casual listening. I gotta disagree with Eino about the 1:02 section, I think it's a nice break from having all foreground to listen to. This sounds a bit like Necros' tracker songs, like Click and Metroplex. And that's a good thing. Good stuff, man. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Groovemaster303 Posted August 28, 2008 Share Posted August 28, 2008 I really enjoyed listening to this, nice work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrSneak Posted August 28, 2008 Share Posted August 28, 2008 It sounds exactly like Japan would've wanted it had it not been a DS game! Good work, I like it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WillRock Posted August 28, 2008 Share Posted August 28, 2008 Here is the source tune for those who want to hear it: Cool, I like the relaxed mood of this. I like the origanal intro, but I'm a little put off by the sound of the guitars - rozovian is right, they sound fake in a bad way, I hate the distortion sound and there is no vibrato in the long notes which doesn't sound natural. The source is obvious and you have great origanal sections - I love the synth solo at the end, that got a great sound too. I also like the break-down you throw in at 1.20, the piano contrapuntal melodies in the background were cool. Nicely done, but please sort out that guitar at the intro Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizyr Posted September 7, 2008 Share Posted September 7, 2008 Throughout the vast majority of the franchise, she's dead. I, for one, would not tap that. What if she were summoned by Maya for a little while? Anyway, I'd definitely like to hear this improved and eventually submitted, since it's sounding real good so far. I'm afraid I don't have much in the way of comments, though. KF Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Native Dialect Posted September 8, 2008 Share Posted September 8, 2008 (edited) . Edited June 17, 2021 by Native Dialect Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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