I wasn't part of the original evaluation, nor have I listened to it so I guess I'll bring a fresh approach here. First thing to be addressed is the vocal SFX. I will admit I'm a fan of using narrations or vocal clips in my own music to add flavor and context, but I think they are a bit too much here. From what I can gather there used to be more prevalent in the previous version. In this version I think the usage is borderline, as in, I think they could be pushed back and removed further but they're not so prevalent as to take over what should be more important (the arrangement behind them).
Speaking of the arrangement, I thought it was pretty sweet, the melodies and performances are a strong point, very jazzy, yet chill and freeform. I didn't take as much issue with the more crowded sections, and I really enjoyed the arrangement, even if I never heard the BOTW soundtrack before.
Production is pretty solid for the most part, clean and warm in most places. I believe the vocal sfx will be a big point on contention in people's mind (and youtube comments!) if this gets posted, but this is the artist's vision for the track and the amount of sfx and whether they are enough or too much is now so borderline I think it will come down to preference. I would still like to point out to listeners to look beyond them as there's a very solid and enjoyable arrangement behind.
YES