Ack, sorry for the lack of crits in here... It's probably Ice Cap Envy.
Let's see if I can help break up the non-responsive pattern, here.
Mod Review:
Alright, from what I gather the arrangement consists of the theme playing pretty close to verbatim, then there's some improvisation over the harmonies with the hollow sounding synth. When that second breakdown comes in you bring in a little Green Hill zone, which is pretty cool, actually, but there's really not enough variation or change to reach the level of interpretation required for OCR, as it stands. If you stick with this, my suggestion would be to break from the repetitive harmonies that the source provides from time to time, and possibly explore more of the possibilities of Green Hill Zone merging with the piece (that was a highlight of the track, for me).
The solos feel like they randomly meander - they need at least a little direction if they're going to work. The instrument that plays the little solo-esque sections is pretty weak. It's just hard to hear it play what it has to play, there. That guitar would've been more fitting for that sort of job, or at least another instrument that is more poignant.
Overall, the sample quality is incredibly dry and bland. They sound like presets of some sort that have nothing done to them to make them fill the space. While synth design and such would help a lot, some easier solutions are available as well - reverb and delay, for example, help make the instruments sound more 'full', when used in moderation (too much just makes a mess of things). Again, better samples could help, too - the guitar is particular is painful to listen to.
While I promise this will not pass OCR's panel, hopefully some of the things I said will help you out, regardless. Good luck.