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Your bass synth sounds like it's quacking when it's at normal speed. Aside from that, there's not much I like about this. If you really want to make a Dungeon 9 techno song I suggest you start from scratch, since this seems beyond repair. Sorry if you're offended by my bluntness.

The Tetris is lovely, I must say. Also, the Mario song is Super Mario Bros, not New Super Mario Bros.

The instruments' volumes throughout tend to be biased toward the higher notes, which doesn't work for me with such a bass-focused source tune. The brass section sounds off-key at a few spots. Your :20 - :40 section needs more work than the rest. That being said, I never thought that this song would lend itself to an orchestral arrangement and I think this could be great with some more work.

"I'm not even angry. I'm being so sincere, right now. Even though you broke my heart and killed me... and tore me to pieces... and threw every piece into a fire." And F-Zero X's soundtrack titles, if that counts. "Fall Down to the Scream" "All Need is 30 Deaths" "The Long Distance of Murder" "Crazy Call at Cry"

This is probably the most creative interpretation I've ever heard of this source tune. I could totally see this working in a Paper Mario game, apart from the really synth-y bit, so I guess it comes off as fairly professional for a first post. (Not that the synth-y bit is bad, it's just not loop friendly.) That being said, I felt the scream noise didn't sound quite blend and the flute seems to have an unrealistic amount of vibrato.

I got goosebumps so hard that I could feel my pulse in the back of my head. I don't even know if that makes sense, physiologically, but this song is awesome.

I would not have expected these tracks to work so well together layered on top of each other. Good find, good rewriting. As for negative, there's far too much repetition of the insubstantial bits. And I'm not fond of the arrangement, though that's subjective.

You need a different host for your download. I'm not gonna jump through a bunch of Mega Upload hoops just to listen to your song. And I'm not alone in this opinion.

This is my new favorite WIP.

This follows the source tune way too closely. You've got to re-write more than just the background instruments to make it fit the new genre.

I'm with Rozov, don't go electric guitar with this. Your synth-strings (unless I've yet again mis-identifyed) throughout much of the background are overpowering. On whole it sounds kind of loke an old radio with the bass turned all the way down and the treble all the way up, which could be the reason those strings(?) are so much louder than the lead guitar.

This has really evolved a lot since your first post. It's quite glorious.

Nice. Very Prime-y, so far. It's not over-crowded, you've managed very well in that respect. I'm curious to hear what kind of percussion you've got in mind.

It's cute. I love the Genesis-quality synth horn.

Woah, I've never heard this song without a bass equal to or greater than the source tune. Props for originality, there. This is hard to give feedback for, but I guess it could use some more variation.

I think your piano may be broken. Or partially submerged in water. Give us more to listen to, 30 seconds is nothing to go by.

You really need to get around to bridging those fade-out segments, they're really distracting. Your fade to Twilight flute at 2:30 was pretty cool, but it didn't seem to lead into the Fairy Fountain tune as well as it should've.

The idea of a trance mix for this song at all bothers me on a base level, but I suppose it's not the worst heresy. Your drums are too loud, they seem to be drowning out the synths some of the time. Although that could just be that I'm not hearing it well with this really loud fan right by me. I also don't like some of the synths you chose. I'd be more specific about which ones I mean, but there's no timer on the embedded player and I don't know how to write music. I'll get back to you with more feedback and/or criticisms when I can listen to this without all this background noise in my house.

Not to be rude, but you were asking for feedback so I thought I'd get it off my chest. There is so little difference between the tracks I listened to and the source material that it seems almost pointless to make them. It's clear that you appreciate the tracks and want to bring more to them, you just don't bring much more to them. They sound good, although they're a little on the midi side, you just don't seem to have done a whole lot to them.

I've been meditating, and it turns out I don't much like this, after all. Sorry, man. It's well-made, but this particular punch in the face to genres isn't my cup of tea. There's still some room to draw more quality out of it. The ending, for example, could use a re-write, or at least a little subtlety. And the whole track feels kinda repetitive, though I imagine that's hard to avoid with the source.

I'm with Saron on this one, I think you know their product better than they do. I can't quite describe it; I can hear the leads...smiling. Everything sounds vaguely cheesy and over-digitized, but then it's supposed to, isn't it? I think the main problem is repetition, it still sounds like background music. Damn fine background music, but still in the background.

If there's any arrangement that needs to be on this site it's this right here. This has brightened my day. And it's been a long-ass day; I've been awake for around 26 hours, now.

You used such small chunks from so many sources it only gives me just enough time to start recognizing a tune and then that tune ends. As such, the source becomes a bit unclear. You should post YouTube links to the source tunes so Rozov doesn't yell at you. Also, this is really short. But I assume that will change with time.

Thanks for clearing up my mess of a post, Rozov. Everything he said is basically what I meant to say, only he can write better.