God damn backspace serving as the back button and deleting my text!
Anyways, this is an "ok" mix. A bit short (try for maybe at least 2 minutes), and doesn't sound like it breaks from the source enough. Of course, I have no source to compare it to, so I could be completely wrong. Either way, don't be afraid to add some of your own tracks into the song, as long as its relevant.
The remix as a whole sounds soft. Try pumping up the volume. Don't destroy my ears, but it should only get louder.
I can't wait to hear your revision. This mix is far from ready to be judge-worthy, but the song sounds like it has potential.