Nice. The guitar choice greatly adds to the depth of the song. It sounds like a record that was made in the late 1960's near the beginning, then flash-forward into modern day rock and roll.
My only concern (and I mean only) is that at 3:00 the song seemed to die on me. Granted, 5 seconds later the song had Life 3 casted on it and was revived instantly, but that section really irked me.
Oh, and you need two more extra notes at the end, or make a grand ending of your own. I'll leave it to you to fix that.
SUBMIT THIS!