I love this remix! If I were important in this site I'd direct post it immediately
Anyway, for some useful "criticism", I feel the backing e. piano could use a bit more punch. Maybe editing it so that the attack is a bit more noticeable would help. Also, as timaeus said, the kick could stand out more.
I have no problem with your guitar playing by the way, but I guess it could use more vibratto in the longer notes.