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  1. 18 hours ago, classic_gamer_76 said:

    I can't get enough

    Well, buddy thank you so much!  I need to make the sheet music for your files you sent me the other week now that I am in a place to do it, but just know you are on my mind.

    Seriously, though, if anyone needs anything, I would be glad to make the sheet music of your tracks and record whatever instruments you want.  I can even send you the sheets music!  Jorrito and Chernabogue needed brass, so I did just that.  Just ask them if you need a reference.

  2. AT FIRST LISTEN ON BAD SPEAKERS:
    The drums are too far forward in the mix, most of the time.  They should provide more punch. I LOVE THIS ARRANGEMENT, though.  This sort of doubletime bit has a lot of substance.  I am not a fan of the pacing of the piano part, but it can do more than block chords every change in harmony - also, I think it is mixed a scoche too loud until 3:07.

    Dude, good job with this.  The harmonies in the solo sections move things forward and make me want to listen more.  They ENGAGE.  Good job.

    10/10 preem.  Would listen again,
    - Hank "The Spank Tank" Jankerson -

  3. First off, thanks for the criticism, @Bowlerhat, I agree with some of the things you said!  And you are a musician too, I know this is coming from a good place.  On to discussions:

    19 hours ago, Bowlerhat said:

    I like the arrangement. If I had to say anything about it, then I'd say it's a bit jumpy. It goes from one section to the other, and then to the next, and it also nicely returns to the sections it has already visited before, and everything is connected by the big undertale theme. But musically I can't really find any kind of resemblance between the different sections, neither in groove nor style. Combined with the abrupt transitions it seems kinda medleyish. 

    Upon listening to it with this in mind, the big big jump I hear is the one going into 2:40ish, but looking at the score, it modulates to the subdominant, which might be what you are hearing (?), and texture-wise, its still pretty busy.  Shaker + set, saxes take a back seat, the orchestration is similar to all that came before.  HOWEVER, the textures are sparse during the solos to give them lots of room.  When the guitar takes over melody at 2:40ish, the orchestration gets thicker again.  That may be contributing to jumpiness / medleyness.

    And yeah, technically it is a medley, too.  Really its 4 songs in 1, but Bonetrousle is dominant with the other 3 in the middle only once through or something.  NOW, I CAN TOTALLY see some lack of cohesion where you are talking about that piano gliss going into the more latin section.  That totally the arranger's fault (me).  I think the next sections make up for that some.

    19 hours ago, Bowlerhat said:

    from 1.08 till the bass starts walking at 1.19 for example is very confusing in my ears

    How so?  The majority of that line is parallel thirds, I believe, maybe I rushed  when I was playing tenor

    19 hours ago, Bowlerhat said:

    the synth is just going straight to the melody with those glissando's and stuff

    It's foreshadowing melody over A section material.  I would totally write something like that again, I thought it was cool.  @Mannywing gave me a pat on the back for that one, especially it finishes out in the second half of the true A section melody.  We thought it welded those themes together without intruding.

    19 hours ago, Bowlerhat said:

    While there's also still saxophones playing and french horns. It just seems like a bit much

    I feel you dude, but I wanted FULL instrumentation there to prepare for the final cadence before those 4 bars of drums.

    19 hours ago, Bowlerhat said:

    The sax solo is great

    Thaaank you so much - I was really proud of that one.  I had to spend time crafting it, tinkering.

    19 hours ago, Bowlerhat said:

    Marc also plays trumpet

    @Mannywing would know better than I, but I hadn't thought about that.  Great suggestion.

    In closing, I am aware that there are a lot moving parts in this machine, but it achieved the level of complexity I wanted.  I believe in finding more things to latch onto as you listen through than once.  I DO BELIEVE it would have benefited from being recorded live with all the musicians in the room, but unfortunately, that requires a lot of players, a lot of gear, and a lot of time.  We did this with 5 people, some mics, and a couple of preamps, and its a sure thing that mixing that many different tracks is tricky-dicky.

    Keeping all your words in mind going forward, I am so glad you listened to it.  Currently, I am writing stuff with thinner orchestration, which might help with what you thought was distracting.  But, yeah man, I am glad I read your post!

    Let me know what you think of my responses.
    Peace,
    - Hank "The Spank Tank" Jankerson -

  4. 3 hours ago, AngelCityOutlaw said:

    If you become an NPO and you're making all this money from Patreon, Ad-Revenue etc. what happens to all the surplus (and there is surplus, right?) in say, 20 years and OCR closes down? Do we all really believe that this site is going to be around forever? Is DJP still going to be running it in his old age? What happens after he dies?

    • Don't speak for the Pretz
    • Dont ask leading questions like your "suplus" question when we all know the money will be reinvested back in the OCR community.
    • "Worst case scenario" questions are counterproductive
    • How dare you.  DjPretzel will live forever.
    3 hours ago, AngelCityOutlaw said:

    $2,269 per month via Patreon is an amount of money the average musician and even many people with full-time jobs would be envious of, but I doubt the site costs that much to keep it going.

    As a musician, I can say that this would noooot be enough, but if it was from Patreon *in addition* to gigs paying the bills, then yeah.  And, I mean, ANY amount of money from Patreon is nice, it just can't be counted on to pay the bills.  Also, Patreon exists for products, but a gigging, working musician is considered a member of the service industry, which pays more.  MY FIGURING HERE is that the service industry (and i mean skilled work - not minimum wage) is about $1.25/minute, where on Patreon, tracks might be 99c a piece or something.

    I got sidetracked there, sorry.  All that being stated, I am going to go become a monthly patron of OCR now  because I just realized I haven't been doing my part.

  5. For those of you wanting/needing a woodwind player or a bass guitarist, I really want to play for you.  If you have a vision of the end product, I can help get you there.  I have been playing for 15 years, and I love helping people in this community out.

    For reference, here is me playing saxophone and bass on an album my band recently released on Overclocked Records

    Here is another on the same album - much more work done here.

    I am flexible, and would love to talk to you about your musical needs!  Let me know if I can do anything for you.

    - Aaron Schmitt -

  6. BRO!

    I will start by saying that I love this interpretation.  Good job.  I don't think the source material is anything I would have ever touched, but you have changed my mind.

    And now the criticism:  I think the drums are mixed too far forward.  I cant't understand anything going on the guitar at climactic moments until it is the feature later in the arrangement.  Let the voices all have an equal say throughout the tune!

    Your slapping technique is vastly different from mine and I would love to talk with you about how you do it - its super defined and I want to hear your wisdom in that regard.

    - Aaron -

  7. Hey, Nathan, thanks for the love!

    19 minutes ago, Nathan Allen Pinard said:

    Be a real sax player and be you know...loud.

    ^OH BELIEVE ME.  I was playing loud, but there are more moving parts in this than a BMW door handle.  The saxes don't have much melodic importance until the halftime drop.  We mixed them back some to get some "proper" balance of melody vs accompaniment vs rhythm.

     

    19 minutes ago, Nathan Allen Pinard said:

    Why the chorus/double tracking on the solo? Go RAW (with a bit of verb)

    ^I wanted it to sound MEAN, and to me, Phat Verb isn't the way to get mean.  It'll lend some perceived volume, for sure, but I thought it needed teeth.

    I hope some of that made sense.

  8. Hello there,

    After dealing with this track for a while now, I think I know it intimately, and I think it has a lot of wiggle room with interpretation.  That being said, I wouldn't call your remix an "arrangement," but I think "cover" could describe how you treated it - no change in harmony or melody, but you did change the backing rhythm.

    Things that bug me and how to fix them: the pizzicato strings have a delay on them which makes the midi sound..... inaccurate.....?  [0:38]
    The scratches in the guitar should be stronger on the upstroke.  Another way to phrase it would be the syncopated offbeats.
    The kick is on 1 & 3, which is "correct" but the scratch mutes in the guitar are not giving you the snare-y sound you want.  I only caught that in the second listen-through.  I originally thought you weren't even going for a 2 & 4 high tone.  Make the offbeats in the guitar more accented by powering up the treble some, and make the velocity higher.

    Things I like:  The accordion sound, the artwork, how long you make me wait for the full drop [1:10] - thats real nice.  I also think that trill in the strings is cool as the full ensemble powers up to go into the A section again.

    Thank you for the post - I had fun digging into your cover of this tune.

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