Wow. Totally drenched in reverb. Really gotta tone it down there. You're relying far too much on the reverb to fill up your soundscape; take it all out and there's very little actually going on.
I'd like to hear a fuller arrangement; a lot of what I hear is melodic lines run through preset choppers and arpeggiatiors with a healthy dose of delay effects. The deep-dark-water-effects are a little hokey too, because they're so exposed. Don't rely on those.
Not a bad sound, but needs a lot of work.
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