The lead/melody kinda feels weird off to the left. Bring it closer to the center, i just don't feel like it's strong enough by itself on the left like that. especially in comparison to the highly crunchy very strong rhythm backing.
or bring it up in volume slightly.
the synths are excellent, the arrangement is solid.
as far as the arrangement goes, it's a little conservative in terms of treatment of the source itself, but there's probably enough new stuff in here to squeek past the judges (if you're submitting).
the whole piece needs an ending now too.
good work though, always in need of more bloodlines love.