MindWanderer Posted February 10, 2014 Share Posted February 10, 2014 Random thoughts and comments, non-comprehensive, mostly intended as constructive criticism: Sterling: There's a decent arrangement in there somewhere, but the instruments are just really, really bad. That ...kick...thing... is pretty annoying, and everything else just sounds thin, lifeless, and badly balanced. With better volume levels, some reverb, and better percussion it wouldn't be half bad. Garpocalypse: You're one of those remixers who's getting better by leaps and bounds lately. You have no idea how much I was expecting, and hoping, for a sax to kick in during this mix. Some "wrong" notes starting at 2:21. DusK: Seems to be lacking in the low end. Timpani is a little lifeless. Lead solo violin sounds pretty bad, it's really thin, fakey, and mechanical. Great arrangement, though. Eino: Awesome that the title works out so well in your native language. Overkill on the snare, and the guitar is kind of muddy. Not a whole lot of variation. BrothaDom: Sometimes your lead and accompaniment aren't in the same key, so watch that. Rapping is pretty unenthusiastic, good rapping sort of shouts! Each! Word! BlackPanther: Smooth but quiet and a little short. Chernabogue: Now that's some belly-quivering bass! Brass isn't very convincing, though. Even I can hear the overcompression making the brass, ooh's, and violins throb. And the timpani starts getting fatiguing by the end. Arceace: I really like the arrangement, but the disparate volume levels are painful. Some of the "blips" are really loud. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wildfire Posted February 11, 2014 Share Posted February 11, 2014 The way my writing is going so far, my song will be full of innuendo. Hopefully it doesn't turn out too stupid. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryan Jobson Posted February 11, 2014 Share Posted February 11, 2014 (edited) The way my writing is going so far, my song will be full of innuendo. Hopefully it doesn't turn out too stupid. tits or gtfo. Edited February 11, 2014 by Ryan Jobson Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KingTiger Posted February 11, 2014 Share Posted February 11, 2014 tits or gtfo. ^.^ /10char Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrothaDom Posted February 11, 2014 Share Posted February 11, 2014 The way my writing is going so far, my song will be full of innuendo. Hopefully it doesn't turn out too stupid. I wrote a song comparing Sonic characters to the Ninja Turtles...I don't think there's such thing as too stupid Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Ryan Jobson Posted February 11, 2014 Share Posted February 11, 2014 Hahahahahhaahah!! It's purr-fect!!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamphibious Posted February 11, 2014 Share Posted February 11, 2014 R-r-r-rematch! I haven't had a chance to start mine yet, and I'm still debating what style to go with. I might have a cool fusiony idea in my head but I dunno if I can pull it off Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garpocalypse Posted February 11, 2014 Share Posted February 11, 2014 [*]Garpocalypse: You're one of those remixers who's getting better by leaps and bounds lately. [ thanks Mindwanderer! Sometimes you don't realize how long you have been working against yourself and when you finally discover something you could be doing better other things start to click. ...Just ask Superior about those stems I sent him over the summer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SuperiorX Posted February 12, 2014 Author Share Posted February 12, 2014 I hope all the Sonics are making good progress on their tracks! Mine is coming along fairly well ...Just ask Superior about those stems I sent him over the summer. Why were there 5 bass channels?! All your bass are belong to me But yeah you're definitely getting better and better Gar. Your song this round was slick. I'll comment more when I give my full reviews later this week. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamphibious Posted February 12, 2014 Share Posted February 12, 2014 I decided to start today and got a solid minute done. Looks like some FM-funk-chippy-fusion this week? I'm not sure what to call it yet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jnWake Posted February 12, 2014 Share Posted February 12, 2014 I should start writing mine soon, but I have most of it planned. I think it'll be cool! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garpocalypse Posted February 12, 2014 Share Posted February 12, 2014 I hope all the Sonics are making good progress on their tracks! Mine is coming along fairly well Why were there 5 bass channels?! All your bass are belong to me But yeah you're definitely getting better and better Gar. Your song this round was slick. I'll comment more when I give my full reviews later this week. I told you that you were going to have a good laugh when I sent you those. 5 seperate bass tracks 3 or 4 pads 2 sequence loops and a different lead for each 8 bar phrase. I had no idea why that wasn't sounding like I wanted it to... Rage Reviews for the current round forthwithcoming! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phonetic Hero Posted February 12, 2014 Share Posted February 12, 2014 I decided to start today and got a solid minute done. Looks like some FM-funk-chippy-fusion this week? I'm not sure what to call it yet Copycat Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamphibious Posted February 12, 2014 Share Posted February 12, 2014 Copycat But I gotta get funky! Azure Lake and Marble Garden are a semitone apart, so close! Aw well, only a slight transposition needed. My mix is coming along pretty nicely so far Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mirby Posted February 12, 2014 Share Posted February 12, 2014 I told you that you were going to have a good laugh when I sent you those. 5 seperate bass tracks 3 or 4 pads 2 sequence loops and a different lead for each 8 bar phrase. I had no idea why that wasn't sounding like I wanted it to... Rage Reviews for the current round forthwithcoming! when i first started using FL i didn't know what patterns were for so i recorded literally everything in one go whoops, messed up. have to delete the entire thing and start over Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuberz McGee Posted February 12, 2014 Share Posted February 12, 2014 (edited) when i first started using FL i didn't know what patterns were for so i recorded literally everything in one go That's pretty much still me. It's why I hate changing arrangements SOOOOO MUCHHHH But regardless, you learn new ways to do things every day. I learned something new today. Did you!?!?!1? EDIT: Also, when people change my name in the voting threads I laugh every time. I goddamned love that stuff. <3 Edited February 12, 2014 by Tuberz McGee Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chernabogue Posted February 12, 2014 Share Posted February 12, 2014 I'll wait for Friday's show to vote. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rexy Posted February 12, 2014 Share Posted February 12, 2014 A few voting reminders, since we're about 3 days in: * Flexstyle still has 4 matchups to vote in (Gar/DusK, therex/Dom, Chernabogue/Arceace and his own) for his other 3 to count. * urdailywater also has 4 left (Tuberz/Sterling, Gar/DusK, therex/Dom and his own). * Shrackattack has only voted in the Chernabogue/Arceace matchup so far and would need to do the other 6 for that vote to count. * And wch090 is missing the Gar/DusK matchup. You'll be punching yourself in the teeth if you miss out after Sunday morning Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
halc Posted February 12, 2014 Share Posted February 12, 2014 my track is submitted. hope you can take a bit of heat, miss wildfire. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wildfire Posted February 12, 2014 Share Posted February 12, 2014 my track is submitted. hope you can take a bit of heat, miss wildfire. Me too! I have about half the lyrics done and maybe 1 minute of currently-mediocre material, but I'm pretty sure I can polish things up in time. I'm hoping mine won't turn out too embarassing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SuperiorX Posted February 14, 2014 Author Share Posted February 14, 2014 So I'm done with my song. I ended up getting pretty creative with the source usage, much more so than my first track. The style is pretty interesting too - branching out a little bit more for me. I hope everyone else is making good progress! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_NutS Posted February 14, 2014 Share Posted February 14, 2014 (edited) Maxie's track and mine refuse to meld together. Frustration level: 8999 EDIT: Thankfully I have friends who, unlike me, are actually talented! thanks for giving me a hand Jason-Sensei song is progressing steadily now. Edited February 14, 2014 by Sir_NutS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SuperiorX Posted February 14, 2014 Author Share Posted February 14, 2014 Maxie's track and mine refuse to meld together. Frustration level: 8999 EDIT: Thankfully I have friends who, unlike me, are actually talented! thanks for giving me a hand Jason-Sensei song is progressing steadily now. Hopefully Maxie is able to make progress too, since it sounded like he hadn't started yet as of Wednesday. We can't have deez NutS advance by default again! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir_NutS Posted February 14, 2014 Share Posted February 14, 2014 Hopefully Maxie is able to make progress too, since it sounded like he hadn't started yet as of Wednesday. We can't have deez NutS advance by default again! I always get free passes in these compos. I got 3 in a row once. Apparently I'm cursed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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