Hrmmmm...
Really not sure on this one. There are some sections where everything is peachy and awesome (see 1:33 when the drums enter), and there are some (pretty much all the quieter bits) where it just doesn't get the theme across or you're trying to do something clever with the harmony and convoluting it. Combine that with the longer length and you have several phases of 'this is cool, not sure where this is going, this is cool, don't get this bit' etc.
I think the main issue here for me is the way you've gone about the orchestration is making me expect something emotive, and then it just doesn't quite deliver. It could be the samples, it could be the sequencing/production, or it could be the chips just taking me out of the zone. I'm pretty sure it's all three.
I feel bad rejecting this because you've clearly put a lot of work into this but I'm just not feeling it as a whole, despite the intermittent passages of niceness. I wouldn't be annoyed if this ends up passing but I need more of a reason then I can hear you've put a lot of work into it to get behind it.
NO