Well, been listening to this on repeat for a little while; afraid I'm with the majority on this. It rawks, but its just too indiscernible. The chords are used I agree but its a pretty unoriginal riff so it could be a lot of things without more melody in there. Plus you changed up the riff anyway (to make it more interesting I'm sure, which is fair enough) which kinda makes it even harder to say what it is. Gonna be a nein from me.
I don't need to tell you that it's still a highly polished ass kicking machine, but thats what the former half of this sentence just revealed.
NO
Also, stop watching Crossroads so much.