Rhythm, rhythm, rhythm!
It's still not clear. What program are you using?
You need to know when measures start and stop, because I can't even tell. Your program should have lines indicting where a measure starts and stops, and I don't think you're paying much attention to them.
In this version, I can only see four patterns.
The first pattern over and over, it ends.
Then the second pattern over and over, it ends.
Then the third pattern over and over, it ends.
Then the fourth pattern over and over, it ends.
Develop a lot of patterns, fit them together (RHYTHMICALLY) and create an ARRANGEMENT, not random stuff.
Please don't take this harshly but I think you need to learn some music theory. Try talking to some of the higher ups here, or find some essays composers write about how to create rhythmically sound music.