Right. The start for me seems to be a little cluttered 'round the mids/low mids, all the instruments are competing for space a bit, not sure it's a huge problem. 1:36 onwards however, is pretty good IMO, everything's pretty clear and very well produced, kick and snare included. Seriously digging the square and saw lines, lots of love gone into those parts and it shows. The glitch and FX I couldn't do better myself, they're mad-crazy good.
Gario's on the ball with this one though, I'd say it was pushing it source-wise but I wouldn't change anything you have melody-wise, that would ruin it- just add more sections *happyfacetime*.
As for the drum beat, I don't think it's as lame and boring as Garizzle makes out, just, if you're going to add more sections, make sure you mix things up there.
I love the track, I am totally not adverse to dance music, especially when it's got that glitch, chippy feel.
Good good. Keep me posted on updates.