Hello! Welcome to OCR!
Actually, there's nothing much to do here. All you need at first stage is tide your guitars panorama. Now your guitars(except 0:35) are kinda "too big". Some hard panning will change your soundscape a lot, in a good way.
It's kinda hard to tell right now what else to do or add, before your panorama is so wide.
I can hear that work freqs of all your guitars 200-2000Hz. I'd suggest to drop a bit at 600-1200Hz or/and 200-400Hz. So you can hear what else is need(lift 6kHz?).
Same for bass. 400-1500Hz drop will be interesting, I think.
Some timing issues here and there(bass/kick drum/guitar rhythm), not to bad imo. Some tuning problems, not bad also(but adding flanger or chorus will be good, for some rhythms).
oh, and kick sounds kinda off, from rest of your drum kit. Drop 1kHZ-2,2kHZ and listen. May be you'll hear the problem.
Cool track!)
SFME!