Hey there, just some observations:
- The violin at the beginning is a little unnecessary. It just cuts out and never comes back in. I know in the previous versions you had the violin playing along with the piano, but now that you've taken it out, there isn't really any reason for it to be there.
- I think the piano is panned a little bit too much. It's like I'm only hearing the left hand with my left ear, and only the right hand with my right. I think it would make more sense to have them closer to the middle.
- At 0:17 the waves cut out for a second and then start to repeat. It happens at the end too.
- When the left hand of the piano comes in it starts out a little bit fast and then slows down to the songs tempo. It would be nice if it started at the same speed as the rest of the song.
- The left hand is a bit too simple for me. Adding in some more chords would make it that much better I think.
Hope this helps