Really liking the sound of this regardless - Perhaps switching up the drum pattern here and there might aid with it feeling too long (Variation tends to do that) Or even adding an additional part or so could help, as it's very close to the source. From the technical standpoint, I've no complaints - sounds solid.
: ) Don't limit yourself though, as sources like this allow a fair amount of room for extras and don't give up on this though!
Haha no problem - though I don't feel I'm nearly good enough to give any type of proper evaluation. That said, I'd simply say the Ta-Da's could become more subtle (and could actually stay in the song) with the addition of another melodic element. : o perhaps the addition of some type of some strings (or whatever instrument is appropriate here) to play another melody or something to that extent. Basically, something else that would act as the lead sound that brings it all together : o
aaaah you beat me to it! Nice work here though, keeping the styling of the original but switching it up just enough to make it your own.
: o Personally though, I found the "da-da's" to be a bit much in the long term (perhaps making them a little more subtle could aid with that) but their initial appearance was a nice touch. Also - No expert here but should you want to submit this perhaps you could try adding an additional solo or harmonic element to compliment this. Nothing overly complex but just something to flesh it out a bit more...maybe subtle bells or an arp perhaps. I know ETB isn't the most complex piece, but that in itself leaves room for you to add/experiment a bit more : ).
Various sources honestly. Artwork, certain shows, other types of music (From old school rap to some obscure VG track), other artists, daily occurrences in life, random thoughts...things like that.