Too much reverb to start, and the rain is gimmicky. Flute is mechanical and fakey, needs more humanization. Everything sort of gets messy in the high frequencies; you need to balance your instruments better.
Great ideas when the percussion drops, but this is still lacking in a strong bass element, and there's just this wall of sound coming from the strings. You need to back off on the strings and let your instruments work together, rather than fight for attention.
NO, resub