Drums feel oddly dry and exposed, especially that snare sound. Actually seems a lot louder than everything else going on in the piece.
Lead that comes in at :39 feels really weak. Kind of a buzzy, weak, phased thing that sits in the background. Leads should lead, not sit in the background of the soundscape.
Drums actually feel on auto-pilot the more I listen to this. Sometimes things change intensity but those drums are still chugging away, all loud and stuff. :\
There's kind of a punchiness that pervades the track too. Everything besides the weak buzzy synth lead sounds like it's being plucked or played extra hard; your synth stabs, pizz strings, and piano.
Arrangement is alright but overall the percussion really makes this piece feel like it's plodding along. Needs some more work I think.
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