this is really decent it has tons of potential but it needs some shine the synths youre using sound default ish. this track needs some more swing with the hats when the main lead comes in. in speaking of the lead it would really shine if you can get a high sneering lead something that cut through the mix a lil. and the kick needs to be more harder not too much but more punchy. this is sounding like its shaping up to be a really good track. keep at it