ARRANGEMENT / INTERPRETATION
[x] Too conservative - sticks too close to the source
PRODUCTION
[x] Low-quality samples
[x] Drums have no energy
STRUCTURE
[xx] Lacks coherence overall (no "flow")
[xx] Not enough changes in sounds (eg. static texture, not dynamic enough)
[xx] Pace too plodding
PERSONAL COMMENTS (positive feedback, specifics on checklist criticisms, any other thoughts)
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needs to be more repetitive. Seemed to be plodding along. Maybe incorporate some automation or have some interesting synths in the background.