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  1. You do that. Sometimes it takes more than one full, complete attempt, maybe even more than 3. i.e. Dirt Devil by zircon took one try plus 3 redoes.
  2. What's up, avatar twin? :D You should totally come back on ocremix, it's been two months!

  3. If you haven't already, try separating your drums into multiple instances so you can route them individually into a mixer. Then EQ them so that their frequencies don't overlap significantly with those of any others. I usually end up slightly boosting around 100 Hz for the Kick with a thin peaking curve, boosting a bit less than that for the Snare at about 200-300Hz with a relatively thin (wider than "thin") peaking curve, putting a really thin bandstop filter in between to fix up any excess boom from the toms, dipping the mids slightly with a wide peaking curve, and boosting the treble more than slightly with a high shelf curve for the tom's high-end hits and the hats/cymbals/rides. Of course, that's for one EQ module applied on an entire drumset, so you can definitely subdivide it and use each portion of the EQ as a reference for individual EQ's to apply for each mixer track.
  4. Okay, yeah, I definitely hear the drums are overcompressed. You might be accidentally reducing the dry signal too much somehow. Reload the drum patch to how it was by default, and do what you need to to get completely dry, unprocessed drums. Then add your own reverb sparingly, just so it sounds like it's in a room, but nothing close to an auditorium. More like a studio. The guitars are too soft. I think the bass is actually at an alright volume, possibly. We'll see.
  5. Well... if a song is made really well for how it's arranged, it sure feels nostalgic to me. For example: The Long Journey Ahead (Diggi Dis) Countdown to Infinity (WillRock)
  6. I'm not home yet, so I can't give a proper look into this yet, but here's some advice for now. I find it ideal that, after my own experiments: - Drums should peak at 0dB, but be careful not to overcompress them. Get it to exactly 0dB or slightly less, but don't allow the amplitude without a limiter on to get too far above 0dB, or it'll add an unnecessary pumping sound that will dull the track. Very very slightly over in the 'correct' way adds some 'glue' or 'punch' to the drums (mainly the kick and snare). Watch the kick most often, as that is the most prone to be the cause of overcompression. - The rhythm guitars should be peaking close to -5dB. - The lead guitar should be peaking close to -4dB. - The bass guitar should be peaking close to -4.5dB. The reason that the bass is higher than the lead is because the bass frequencies are harder to hear, so boosting them by a reasonable amount winds up giving them a higher amplitude than another instrument with the same specifications and a higher frequency range. Rhythm guitars are a combination of both, but primarily the lows, so it should be slightly less than the bass, and the grunginess of rhythm guitar chugs should allow them to cut through, compensating for being at a lower amplitude. At least, that's what works for me, more or less to those specifications, but remember that those specifications are for when the EQ is already perfectly established and the only things left to do are master (track) compression work for punch/face-melting and instrument balancing for clarity. s(M)exoscope is a free spectral analyzer that you can use to preview your track's final waveform for the left or right channel so you can fix stuff and make it look and sound right before rendering, saving loads of time. Google it!
  7. Yeah, you have to delete the entire link so the associated URL doesn't stay the same. Btw, it would be well worth your time to use a non-youtube music host, such as box.com, tindeck.com, or soundcloud.com (or some others).
  8. Yeah, sometimes there are songs that work better in a similar arrangement to the original. I prefer to remix something with room for reinterpretation. You can always change up the atmosphere of the track in certain sections. Maybe have a no percussion piano breakdown, or maybe create your own variations to the melody and branch off from there. I find it better to analyze the chord progression of the original, modify the rhythm of that (or even add chords in between!), and when you think it sounds cool, fit the melody to that chord progression by changing the rhythm and/or spreading it out to span the chord progression. .
  9. Vocal exercises? Have him warm up. Or, wait until about 6 PM. Usually then the voice is easiest to control.
  10. This is an old topic, but I did mean to go back and make that lead on Zebra2, so here it is. xD https://www.box.com/s/ibdsqpfimdmk73xl8a3o A small twist is that there isn't a modwheel control, but instead, an XY control. It's possible to do modwheel, but I'll leave that to the composer. Notes: - Saw wave, hint of reverb and delay. - 12dB LPF plus a very mild formant filter. - XMF lightly gives it that analog feel, hence the "analogue" label.
  11. Better than what I could do in my first few months of mixing. xD Right now, the snare and kick are getting buried under the bass and the hi hats. In fact, the snare and kick are probably suffering from too little of the dry signal in the reverb you have going on with the drums. Try to fix the clarity issue there. Aside from that, the arrangement feels like a direct MIDI remix to me. Nice sound, though.
  12. Hm... Is there any chance you're mistaking "clipping on purpose" for bitcrushing?
  13. I agree on the timbre of the lead. This is one last thing I forgot to talk about. The lead by itself is fantastic, but the glide is a smidge too much. It gets more obvious at 1:16 when overlapping notes are more prominent. Actually, that's probably the only section that it's marginally too much glide. See if you can't do some MIDI CC automation to turn down the glide for only that section. It sounds fine in other places. Let's say that the glide was at "20". I'd say turn it down to about "14".
  14. Hm. The arrangement ideas aren't all that bad. Of course, the quality isn't what you want it to be, but you knew that. The guitar and drum sequencing are pretty good. Actually, the drum samples are awesome.
  15. I challenge you to create nostalgia in a daring new arrangement!
  16. Well, since I did a lot of stuff to it, I might as well write out a few things I did: - Balancing and spatial arrangement, of course. - Reverb, like on the piano, strings, etc, just to give it the feel that it's in an actual room. Raw, dry samples just aren't realistic. - Drums were just FL's FPC. I didn't know how else I could transfer drum samples without transferring actual drum samples. - The acoustic guitar was a patch from a large guitar soundfont set we both happened to grab at some point. I kept the arrangement exactly the same. This is pretty much what I managed to do with what I saw.
  17. Yeah, I recently upgraded (well, switched, really) from Sony earphones to a WAY better set of Sony headphones, IMO. I've had them for so long, but after switching to those, I realized how good they really were. My old ones broke on one side and were low in treble anyway. I do mean what I said with the low mids, actually, but it's minor. It's not overbearing, and it's borderline between "great" and "awesome", leaning towards "great". Another thing I forgot to say was that after focusing on listening to the drums, I feel like they sound the same throughout the entire segments with drum parts. Others might call it "auto-pilot", but it's probably because they read a specific Music Theory book (which I might actually have found that once belonged to my sister). It had language such as "jarring", "tinny", and so on which remind me of the language of the judges. xD Anyways, some variations and fills on the drums would do the track a lot of good. Their timbres are sufficient.
  18. At 0:03, the low strings sound a bit too heavy in the low mids, but only slightly. Try lowering the frequencies in the low mids a bit, and raising the mids, so that the overall volume remains the same, but it's less muddy. Great choice of strings, though. I ripped this song just now into Adobe Audition, and the waveform looks too loud in the intro, for one. If you can make it sound good quiet, it'll sound good loud. Try to see if you can make the strings sound the same volume at -10dB. Weird idea, I know, but try it. It'll make everything sound more clear. In general, it looks overcompressed. You can bump up the drums to 0dB, and remove any compressors you have on other instruments if you have any. Make sure you can see the drum hits clearly in the waveform. Very nice job so far.
  19. This overall really close, IMO. There's just some small level issues. I believe I've finally mastered mixing rock and metal cleanly now, and I've found that having your lead guitar at -4dB, rhythm guitars at -5dB, and drums maxed out at 0dB with the proper compression will work. Also, you can start over on the synth lead volumes. Just drop it a lot, then raise it until you first hear it loudly enough. One other thing is to check and make sure you aren't overcompressing things. If you're using a compressor to keep volumes under control, don't do it too much; most of an instrument's character is in the parts of the sound wave that stray higher than its typical amplitude. It just doesn't seem like this song is really blowing me away just yet. The writing is there. Now just check your compression algorithms.
  20. Cool, great work! The ending could use one more note, same as your current second to last note. The only other thing I'd say now is to really beef up the soundscape now that you have the balance and ideas down. Upgrade your sounds! Oh, and you should have a rimshot transition at 3:16. xD Kinda like at 1:44 in !EDIT: WAIT WAT. Did you speed up the tempo between 4:01 and 4:30? xD
  21. Those toms. In general, the atmosphere is great. But yeah, I agree, definitely layer more snares on top of that at 1:04. You can probably still layer more 80s snares there to get the overall sound you want while still sticking to the 80s idea. At 1:36, the snare+clap layer is strong, but not in a preferable way. It feels like your clap is louder than your snare, but your clap is longer. Try choosing a shorter clap and a longer snare. There isn't too much reverb, but use a spectral analyzer and fix your levels. Make sure things are how loud they should sound. Some things are too soft, like at 2:12 and 4:35 with the guitar. The square lead at 3:13 could use some modulation, like vibrato to keep things interesting. Great ideas, keep it up!
  22. Yeah, I still stand by what I said earlier; I just don't have critiques I can really say on EQ and balance for this song. xD Er... I didn't mean to say Sunken Ship. I meant S.S. Anne from RBY. xD (Read the top comments!)
  23. No problem! Well, let's see... The snare at 0:51 still feels like its reverb is a bit too much. Try to have the reverb there lengthen the snare's waveform, but not feel like reverb. e.g. Give it a sort of hissy tail to make it sound like it's in a room with really good acoustics. At 0:58, the synth arpeggio still feels too loud; from what you wrote there, it appears the piano should be louder. Try increasing the velocities on the piano for that section and lowering the velocities on the synth arpeggio pattern on just that section until it sounds right. At 1:38, the solo(?) feels like it's meandering quite a bit. Try rewriting that a few times and picking the one you like best. Same at 1:55 with the EP. It kinda sounds like what I would have done in my first half year of mixing (been mixing for 1.5 years now).
  24. If you can't think of a chord progression, think about how you want your song to sound during each measure. Then put a harmony note down. If it doesn't fit, shift it up or down until it does. Then write down what letters are in the harmony you have. Fill in what's missing (a middle note) and keep trying until you get the chord you want there. I already know music theory, but it still doesn't help me in FL Studio without the use of my MIDI keyboard. I can play chords better than I can think them up.
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