NO, resub
I like the arrangement but a lot of these leads are really vanilla. The portamento'd lead somehow doesn't seem to sit in the mix properly. Feels really dry and exposed. They heavy syncopation of the melody doesn't really lend itself well to the portamento.
Sequencing is really mechanical. I realize that you're not trying to imitate live instruments, but there are sections like 1:50-ish where there's practically no change in velocities throughout the entire melodic line.
Needs some work I think.