Might want to get a mod to merge the two threads for you....
(Now, after pointing that out, I feel obligated to listen to your remix. )
First impression: 'tis good.
The string instruments that come in at 0:30 and 1:35 (and 1:01 to a lesser extent) sound a little fake, but when the other parts come in I didn't notice it as much. Still, tracking down some better sounds (or at least tweaking the ones you're using a little more) might be a good idea.
The bit at 2:20 kinda caught me off guard at first... until the beat came back two seconds later... man, good stuff.
Not a fan of the snare pattern you start at 2:55 and 5:16. Seems out of place to me.
I think it might be a good idea to trim the length down a bit too. Some parts began to overstay their welcome, so to speak. I think that if you could somehow remove 1 or 2 minutes or so by trimming some of the more repetitive / redundant parts, your remix would be better for it.
I can't really comment on your arrangement of the source; I'm not that familiar with the original.