You wanted to break the overbearing praise here tastefully, eh Snappleman?
Listening to it, I've got to be honest - the remix is on the bland side, here. The samples are raw and... not too high up there, on the quality scale. I personally love the slap bass, though.
The production is not up to snuff, here - there's quite a bit of clipping that's bringing down the quality of the entire track, here (especially with that piano - that clips like no other). Turn down the master track and/or the limiter you might have used on the master track so the sound stops pumping when it gets too loud.
There's no real creative liberty on this track. That's not a bad thing, really, unless you want to submit to OCR. Still, rearranging it to make it your own would improve this track quite a bit and help remove the 'bland' quality it has.
The percussion is pretty strong in this track, I'll give you credit for that. There's a hat that sounds a bit flat/uninteresting, but otherwise the rest of it is really neat and well placed, and sets the track on a strong foundation.
It's not bad, but it doesn't have much to make it stand out, either. I'd like to hear it stand out. Also, YT will compress your track and add artifacts to it. Please provide an Mp3 link to your track using a free hosting site - that will help people comment on the production end better.
Good luck.