No replies? But this is HOBOKA people, you all should be tripping over each other to taste the awesomeness.
Anyway.
First thing i'm noticing is lack of bass. you need a bass in there dude, track is really lacking in that department.
As for production, your samples don't sound so bad to me, but the mixing is very muddy.
I think you lead is the worst aspect, you can hardly hear it and the sample is very iffy. All you need is a simple analogue sawtooth wave with some chorus or something for that, would sound great, that lead needs bringing out man
you need to sort out the EQ as well. I can't be too specific here as to what you need to change them too - I just tend to fiddle until I get a clean sound - but the organ and the choir are muddying up atm, separate them with panning, and mess with the EQ. What I would suggest if everything is sounding very muddy to do is to bring down the levels on everything, and bring up each one, one at a time, and do little fixes until you get as clear a sound as you can get.
There is also alot of reverb on it that could be toned down to help clear things up.
Listen to zircons monstrous turtles I suggest, thats a sound similar to what your trying to get here, and try and get it as close as you can to that in terms of production. Thats a good source of comparison you can use.
Anyway, thats all i'll say here, would comment on arrangement, but no source.
Keep at it dude