it's not done? Because when I listen to the link you posted, it seems to just cut off suddenly at 4:12. Maybe you need to put a few more seconds in there so the sound has time to decay, I guess.
I'm honored that I helped inspire a track!
Yeah, check out that compressor, and make sure you're not compressing the reverb! That's probably why it sounds so extreme. Be careful about comments like this:
two things: of course you don't see a problem with it--if you did, you wouldn't need external feedback
If you don't like somebody's feedback, I HIGHLY recommend you don't say anything. I get feedback I think is terrible all the time, but the minute you argue with somebody's feedback, the message you're sending is "your input is not valuable to me". Just take note of the feedback, decide whether you want to use it, say thanks, and move on. Arguing with feedback is a great way to burn bridges, trust me.