Your first post on the forums shouldn't be an advertisement for your game.
EDIT: We received an email from GameG indicating that he didn't make this game. Regardless, the post reads like an advertisement from the game devs/publishers (e.g. "let us know your thoughts"). If you're new to the community and want to talk about games, that's great, but do so in a way that talks about your experiences with the game. "It’s a unique opportunity to feel like a commander or pirate captain in the midst of a furious seafight offensive!" is advertising copy written by a marketing team ripped straight from the game's about page.