Okay, production wise, I'm not liking the way the low end is used here. The low end is more muddy than anything else... try using some gating or something becuase the tom(?) I think it is really muddy's everything and reverberates too much.
The faster section is cool, same issues that heiswhoiam said.
You have kick drum, but the kick has no low... GIVE THE KICK LOW PLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
Or not, your call, but I'm begging you.
I kinda like that buzzy synth, I wish it wasn't completely in my left ear though... ouch.
Cool ideas though.