Ah, now, it's a lot clearer for me where the volume issues take place. You may turn down the brass velocities during 1:16-1:22, 2:19-2:20; and just a lil' bit at 1:48, 1:54, 2:04, 2:14 and 2:20. At least those parts were the most overbearing for me. I also expressed myself wrong about the organ in the first version. It was generally fine, and the only part where it sounded noisy was 1:13-1:16.
I wonder what the judges would say about that raw sound btw. I actually like it a lot, feels like Vampire Hunter Dan's style. Violin samples are not the 8th wonder of the world, but I'd say it's good enough and works well within the context. (: