Urgh, that intro is very plodding.
This gets very crowded about 1/5 in. The drums are massively overpowering even the loud rhythm guitars. What this mix really needs is emphasis. What line do you want to be most prominent? More than half of the time I'm not sure on what to focus.
Drums: Not my cup of tea, probably tone down the velocities/volume
Rhythm guitar: once again, a little loud
Synth: No real criticisms here.
I'd probably either reimagine the intro or add something more to what you already have, but it seems to be working for other people. Probably just a personal preference.